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Tracy's avatar

Good advice, Neil, especially in fantasy worlds where one feels sort of compelled to explain everything and everyone! 🥰

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Neil Shooter's avatar

Yes, I think it is more common in fantasy stories, and I understand the impulse! But maybe I'm skewed by reading more fantasy stories than general fiction?

I guess I expect a bit more "wordiness" in fantasy stories, for the sake of lyricism or magic-weaving. But in science fiction? I think it is even more important to make the reader work for it :P

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Darkwald's avatar

Really interesting and useful post, Neil! I greatly enjoyed it!

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Neil Shooter's avatar

Thank you Nicolas!

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Lev Raphael's avatar

I've always admired the way that Dune (the novel) opens with gradually released information, all of it important, but none of it overwhelming.

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Neil Shooter's avatar

My copy's in a box in my basement, but the "gradual release" sounds like the way to do it :)

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Lev Raphael's avatar

I've read it three times. It's my favorite fantasy. I was always surprised that my creative writing students doing world building had never read it.

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Neil Shooter's avatar

I'm surprised too! There is SO MUCH in it :)

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