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drea.m.76's avatar

Ah, you're killing me! When it gets to the end, I'm always like, "Nooooooooo!" Patience isn't always my strong suit. 😂

(“I’ll do it, said Brian, and stepped past them. -- You forgot the end quote. Does it bother you that I point stuff like this out? 😬)

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Neil Shooter's avatar

No, I love it, because I can fix it!

I worry that people might start thinking I don't use a spellcheck (I do!) and look for these errors (I do!) :P

But I would much rather root out those errors!

May is really sweary for some reason. That isn't a theme, going forward, I swear :)

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Kay Flanagan's avatar

I’m interested to see how they got from the argument to the later comfortable coexistence.

I love the development of the characters and their relationships.

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Neil Shooter's avatar

You can find out now, because the next part is posted! :)

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